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Thursday, July 9, 2015

Elly and the Enchanter


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A hotel lobby doesn’t really seem like the best place to pass your time, but on the first day of a fan convention, it is the best place.
“Pyramid Head!” Elly called, pointing at a guy lugging a huge costume across the room.
Another one?” asked Lissy. “Why is that even a popular character?”
“You’ve never played Silent Hill?” Lissy shuddered, but Elly grinned. “I thought Gryffindors were supposed to be brave,” she teased.
“Being brave doesn’t mean you go looking for trouble,” Lissy quoted. “Or that you should play horror games just because everyone else does.”
“A Browncoat!” gasped Autumn, looking up from her phone suddenly as though she had fellow-Firefly-fan radar. She looked toward a businesswoman walking across the lobby to the front door.
“You don’t know that,” Lissy protested. “That lady could just have a brown coat. She could just like the color.”
“Well, I guess we’ll see if she hangs out in any Alliance-friendly bars come U-Day,” Autumn replied sagely, returning to her texting.
Elly let out a sigh of enjoyment. “This really is the best. I’m so glad I can go back to the dorm tonight and sleep, instead of having to pack up all my stuff and haul it here, inevitably forget some of it and have to do without. If I forgot my Sonic Screwdriver, I could just go back to my room and get it.
“Pff,” Lissy interjected, “like you’d forget your Sonic Screwdriver.”
Elly tossed her a grin and reached into her back pocket, where she located the tool and waved it at her friend. “The point is, I could go home and get it. I don’t have to deal with the mess and hassle of actually staying at the hotel through all the con craziness.”
“That’s true,” Lissy agreed. “One time I was cosplaying Hermione, and I totally forgot my tie! I just wore a scarf instead, though, so everything was okay.”
“You wore a scarf? What a sacrifice!” Elly laughed, eyeing the Gryffindor colors which permanently adorned Lissy’s neck.
Lissy laughed and rolled her eyes. “Nobody noticed, but I was pretty upset for about fifteen minutes.”
“It’s definitely better being able to get out of the hotel when you need to.”
“Yeah, I totally agree,” Lissy echoed, watching a guy with long red hair (Just like Rupert Grint in Goblet of Fire, she thought) as he struggled with four large suitcases.
“What’s that Shakespeare quote with the ‘protestheth...’” Autumn chimed in, mispronouncing The Bard’s 16th century English.
“‘The lady doth protest too much, methinks’?” Elly provided, with a raised eyebrow.
“It’s not ‘pros...thetic’?” Autumn asked.
“Are you trying to say that you think we actually do want to stay at the hotel this weekend?” Lissy asked, translating for her roommate.
“I didn’t say it,” she replied, then reimmersed herself in her phone.
Elly and Lissy exchanged a look.
“I… kind of do want to,” Lissy admitted.
“Me too,” Elly agreed.
“There probably aren’t many rooms left,” Autumn remarked.
“Go up now and see,” Lissy advised. “We can split the cost, but don’t, like, get a presidential suite or anything.”
Elly laughed, already out of her seat and walking toward the front desk. “You mean you don’t want to throw the most amazing The Doctor Takes Hogwarts crossover party that this hotel has ever seen?” she called back.
“That wouldn’t be hard,” Autumn muttered.
“Do you have any cosplay planned?” Lissy asked her roommate politely. She still hadn’t quite forgiven Autumn for stranding her in a back hallway of the hotel the day before.
“Yeah,” Autumn said. “I’m going to be a plucky space cowboy on a job that has an elaborate plan... that involves me dressing like a hotel employee for most of the day.”
Lissy nodded. “That sounds nice.”

Standing in line didn’t provide the view that her previous vantage point had. Within the first five minutes, Elly was convinced that she’d missed seeing several of her geeky brethren, and in fact only managed to spot one: a girl who had painted her rolling suitcase to resemble the TARDIS. She didn’t mind the sacrifice, however, and bounced on the balls of her feet, knowing that soon she’d be able to partake of the entire CON experience, with the added bonus of being close enough to go home whenever she needed to.
When the couple in front of her moved forward to speak to the pretty concierge, Elly was first in line. She bounced faster, but she didn’t have long to wait. A person in a DragonBallZ t-shirt grabbed their bag and walked toward the elevators, and the guy behind the counter beckoned her forward.
“I know you might think I’m crazy for asking this,” she gushed out, “But are there any rooms left?”
“I think there are a few,” he replied, tapping at the computer in front of him.
“Are any of them… not the presidential suite?”
He laughed. It was a nice laugh. Elly looked at him. Before, she’d glanced at him like he were a piece of the background, like he was playing Extra #6 in the movie of her life. But when he laughed, it made her want to know what that movie would be like if he were one of the stars.
“It looks like you’re in luck; we’ve got one with two queen beds that I’m reasonably certain no president has ever stayed in.” He looked up and smiled at her. “No Secret Service, foreign dignitaries, or even the president of a neighborhood association, or anything.”
“We’ll take it,” she replied, and waved at her friends to signal her success. Lucky Lissy strikes again! she thought.
He fished out a keycard and began to get her checked her in. “Any big plans while you’re in town?” he asked.
“Oh, yeah! We’re gonna high five some people, stay up way too late every night, and probably marathon a bunch of movies! It’s gonna be awesome!”
He smiled again as he glanced up at her. “Wow, that was a real response. I do this pretend ‘small talk’ thing with pretty much everyone, but you must be the most excited guest I’ve ever had the pleasure of talking to.”
“You’re welcome!”
He laughed.
“Your weekend is probably gonna be pretty awesome too, with CON stuff to keep an eye on.”
“It’ll definitely be interesting,” he agreed. “You’re here for the CON? You didn’t bring much luggage with you.”
“Uh, yeah!” Elly stepped back a little from the counter and pointed at her shirt. “Did you expect something different from the girl in the Union Jack?”
He squinted through his glasses to read her red, white, and blue top, which was emblazoned with the words: “ASK ME ABOUT MY DOCTOR WHO OBSESSION”.
“Doctor Who… that’s the guy with the scarf, right?”
Another poor soul, just waiting to be converted, Elly thought, and nodded. “Yes. For the purposes of our conversation, yes. He’s the guy with the scarf.”
“Is that what you’re going to watch all weekend?”
Elly laughed. “I wouldn’t mind, but my friends probably want something else for a change. I’m not sure what else we’ll have, but at some point we’re definitely watching Monty Python and the Holy Grail.”
“‘There are some who call me… Tim?’”
Elly’s momentarily startled eyes swept across his face and took in his nametag, pinned to the front of his suit jacket, which read: “Timothy Gray, MANAGER”. Then she laughed. And laughed. She got a few weird looks from the other concierge and the people standing in line behind her, but she didn’t care.
“You,” she gasped out when she caught her breath, “are my favorite. You’re totally invited to our The Doctor Takes Hogwarts party. If we decide to have it.”
He looked amused as he gave her credit card back and passed her the keycards for her room. “As long as you don’t mind someone from Middle Earth showing up,” he replied. “I’m more of a Lord of the Rings fan, myself.”
Elly grinned, collecting all of her stuff. “Well, thanks for all your help, and your small talk. I guess I’ll see you around!”
“Sure,” the manager replied with a smile. “Enjoy your stay.”
“I will!” Elly turned to walk away, but felt compelled pass on a warning. On her way past the line of people, she pointed at the manager and informed them, “I wouldn’t try to mess with that guy if I were you; he’s an enchanter.”

Wednesday, July 1, 2015

The Trip, Because of the Fall


“Uh, Autumn, are you sure it’s okay for us to be back here?”
“Yeah! Felicity, I told you, it's fine, it’s cool, my boss is cool. Come on! I want to show you something!”
The two girls moved quickly down the back hallway of the hotel, dodging stacks of chairs, room service carts, and other obstacles.
“I never knew you were into this stuff,” said Lissy. “I mean, if I had, we could have, I dunno, done a movie marathon or something.”
“When?” replied the girl in the hotel uniform. “I’m always here.”
“I guess that’s true,” Lissy muttered.
“It’s fine, we know now, and maybe we can do the movie thing on my next weekend off. In, like, four months. But whatever, come here, look!” They had reached a door, which Autumn cracked open. Lissy could see a large banquet space that was slowly being transformed into booths. “Look, look!” Autumn insisted, pointing to what would soon be a booth on the end of the nearest aisle. “Know who that is?”
It looked to Lissy as though it was a rather good looking guy and a girl who hadn’t quite made up her mind the last time she sat down in front of a hair stylist. Autumn was obviously expecting her to reply, and she felt a little silly saying, “N...o, should I?”
“Seriously?”
Lissy looked at her roommate. “I like Harry Potter stuff. Neither of those people look like actors from the movies, unless you’re gonna tell me that that girl is actually Nymphadora Lupin.”
“Huh?” was Autumn’s reply.
“Yes, that!” Lissy pointed at her roommate’s face. “That’s how I feel when you ask me who those people are. I don’t know.”
Autumn sighed and nodded an apology, just like she had the time she had accidentally left a wet towel on Lissy’s bed. “Okay. Well, you can pretend to be excited with me, then.”
Lissy nodded her forgiveness, just like she had the time she had gotten yelled at by the RA because Autumn had gone to work and forgotten that her stereo was blasting the Pokémon Theme―on repeat―for four hours.
“It’s Kent Jackson,” Autumn said. “He draws Oblivious Girl, and the girl is Hazel Kirke, they write the comic together and she colors it. I would totally get my hair done like hers if they didn’t have a rule against it here.”
“Really?” Lissy eyed the girl’s orange and purple leopard spotted mohawk.
“Yeah, she’s awesome, right?”
Lissy was saved from having to disagree by a man’s voice calling down the hallway, “Autumn, are you down there? You’re supposed to be at the front desk!”
Autumn jumped like she’d been caught with her hand in the cookie jar. “Uh, yeah, I’ll be right there!” she yelled back. Then she turned to her roommate. “Okay, keep going down the hallway, and the second door on the left will take you out onto the sidewalk where you parked.”
“You’re leaving me here?” Lissy protested.
“It’s not a big deal, just go two doors down and you’ll be fine!”
“I thought you said it was okay for us to be back here!”
“Yeah, it is, just… well, not right now, because I’m supposed to be somewhere else. Two doors down.”
And then she disappeared back the way they had come.
Lissy stood, alone in the service hallway of the hotel, marveling at the seedy underbelly of the Chicago fan convention experience. It wasn’t terribly exciting. Or very well lit. She started down the hall in the direction her roommate had indicated, hoping she would be standing outside within sight of her car in a few minutes, but it took her almost two to reach the first door on the left, and the second one was nowhere to be seen.
She wasn’t afraid of getting lost. She was in a large hotel in one of the biggest cities in the country. If nothing else, she could just start shouting, “I’ve been abandoned in a dark hallway by an Oblivious Girl fan!” until someone found her. If that reference didn’t work, she could always resort to Star Wars: “Help me, Obi-Wan Kenobi, you’re my only hope.” She smiled at the thought and pulled at the red and gold striped scarf around her neck. The hallway was so full of stuff that she had to turn sideways a couple of times to squeeze past things. “How can they work back here?” she murmured to herself. “I’m surprised I haven’t knocked anything over, or fallen―”
And that’s when it happened.
She tripped.
Great, now I’m going to die, she thought.
Instead, she heard someone yelp, and say, “What the hell?!”
“I’m sorry, I’m sorry!” she cried as a reflex.
“Whoa, calm down!”
A strong hand above her elbow helped her to her feet, and she looked into the face of her knight in shining armor. He looked like that comic artist, but Lissy was sure it couldn’t be him, since she’d just seen him in the other room. Plus, this guy’s hair was black instead of light brown.
“You’re not… who I thought,” he said. “Are you okay?”
“Are you?” she replied, as he rubbed a hand on his shins.
“I’ll be all right. Why did you trip over me?”
“It’s not like I did it on purpose! You’re the one laying on the floor with your legs across the hallway!”
“True enough.”
“What are you doing here, anyway?”
“I’m hiding from Hazel. I’ve already carried about a million boxes in for them today, and I had to sneak away to get some rest.”
“Oh.” Lissy felt slightly awkward, standing with some stranger alone in a deserted hallway. Maybe she would put one of her Gryffindor socks in with Autumn’s laundry when she got back to the dorm. “Well, I... think they rent rooms here. It’s a hotel.”
“Yeah, but…” he began, then shook his head. “Never mind. Sorry I tripped you.”
“It’s fine. I’m sorry I tripped.” She glanced along the wall on her left. “You wouldn’t by chance happen to have seen a door on this side of the hallway, would you?”
“Sure, there’s one on the other side of that rack of wine glasses. Why?”
“It’s how I make good my escape,” she informed him. She shifted the glassware, which luckily was on a rolling cart. “Wow, I never would have seen it if I hadn’t tripped over you. Pretty lucky, huh?”
“I’ve never heard of someone luckily tripping over an innocent bystander,” he said with a grin.
“That’s me,” she replied. “Lucky Lissy!”
Just then, a door on the right side of the hallway opened to reveal an irate girl with a leopard mohawk. “Jack, are you slacking off again?!”
Jack sighed. “Yes, I am,” he admitted.
“Well, get back in here, I’m too short and I need your help hanging stuff.”
“Yes, ma’am,” Jack said resignedly. He glanced at Lissy. “Good luck,” he told her.
“Same to you,” she said, and opened the door, looking back to see him following Hazel Kirke back onto the floor.
She stepped outside, and there was her car, right in front of her. She sighed. At least Autumn had been right about that. It wasn’t even the first day of the CON and already she was having adventures. This was going to be an interesting weekend.
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Wednesday, August 20, 2014

Writing Prompt: Across the Fence


This story was co-authored by my wonderful writing partner Stella, who shares a brain with me even though we live across the country from one another. It’s amazingly great to have someone who gets excited about ideas with you and occasionally types exactly what you were going to type just before you type it yourself.

Writing Prompt #732

There is plenty to see while vacationing in Brazil. Cristo de Redentor, the Amazon River, and the Carnival in Rio. What Kara Wheelock didn’t expect to see out the window of her top-rated hotel was the other side of town. She expected to have a view of the city, just not… the type of view that was in front of her. Sure, bustling markets, traffic, and skyscrapers lit up in the night, but nothing prepared her for what was on the other side of the large fence at the edge of the hotel’s property.
It was a neighborhood. One that was very different from those that the hotel’s patrons would live in, much less willingly drive past or be forced to walk through. And instead of getting dressed to go to dinner and clubbing with her friends, Kara looked across the hotel’s lovingly landscaped grounds and watched that neighborhood all afternoon.
It was the most interesting thing she’d ever seen in her life.
It definitely wasn’t what she’d expected to see in Brazil.
In some ways, it felt like she was seeing some sort of documentary. “The Life of the Disadvantaged,” or something. With the fence between them, it didn’t seem real. Even though she could see them quite clearly from her balcony, she couldn’t imagine people actually living like that.
None of the other guests in the hotel really talked about it, and it was hard to remember what was only a few hundred feet away when she was eating five star food in a five star hotel, surrounded by the five star life she’d always lived.
A text from her best friend Stacey reminded her that their plans wouldn’t wait for philosophical ponderings, so Kara hopped off the bed and got ready. The five star views didn’t stop her from thinking about what she’d seen from her window, and for probably the first time in her life, she started noticing people other than the ones being served.
As they ate, she watched a familiar looking guy bussing other tables. Where had she seen him before? Oh, yeah, he had been the one to take her bags when they checked in. Stacey had purred, “Ooh, cabana boys! This is going to rock!” and they had gone upstairs to change and then relaxed in the pool for the rest of the afternoon.
Kara hadn’t given him a second thought. Now, her eyes followed him around the room as he carefully balanced half finished glasses of wine on a huge tray and wove between the other diners back to the kitchen.
She wondered what he did when he wasn’t taking bags up to people’s rooms or clearing tables. She wondered where he lived.
Her contemplations were interrupted by a hand waving in front of her face. “Hello! Earth to Kara! Are you even listening?”
“What?”
Melody smirked. “I think she was a little distracted.”
Stacey glanced around and spotted the guy Kara had been watching. “Ooh, good distraction. He is more interesting than our plans for tomorrow, but I don’t think he’d be interested in joining us at the spa.” She giggled.
“I don’t know,” Melody said. “I don’t think I’d mind being distracted by him in the sauna!”
Kara laughed along with her friends. It was easier for her to be teased like that than to have them suspect what she was really thinking about. It’s not that they would mock her, they would just wonder why she was wasting her time on such a subject when there were more interesting things to do.
She put him out of her mind. After all, there was fun to be had and partying to be done.


Kara had only been asleep for two hours when a loud banging sound woke her up. She pulled a pillow over her head, trying to ignore it, but it wouldn’t stop. It couldn’t be a hangover starting so early, could it?
She sat up and rubbed her eyes. She was fairly sure two drinks over the whole course of the evening wouldn’t make her head pound this badly. But… was it her head?
She reluctantly opened her eyes. There was enough light coming through the open window for her to see clearly, and it wasn’t hurting her eyes. That was a definite no to the hangover, then. She rolled out of bed and stumbled to the door. No one there. It was then that she noticed that the noise was coming from her window. She tried to stay half asleep—she did not want to be awake for the day—and made her way over to see what was going on.
She gazed out across the vastness of the city, squinting to try to keep the light from invading her hopes of a REM cycle. The sound had to be coming from somewhere nearby, otherwise it wouldn’t have bothered her. She scanned the streets of the neighborhood across the fence until finally, she saw it. There was someone kneeling on one of the roofs, banging on it with a hammer.
Why, at five in the morning?! she wondered, exasperated. A second look showed her that the figure, though far away, was someone she had seen before. Forgetting the sleep she had been craving, Kara rubbed her eyes again. Was it actually… the same guy she’d been looking at the night before?
What was he doing? Did he have family there? Well, of course he did if he was there now, but… even working as a busboy, he hadn’t seemed destitute. He’d spoken English without much of an accent, he’d been polite, he certainly cleaned up well… but there he was, fixing someone’s roof in the middle of the poorest neighborhood she’d ever seen.
At five in the morning. Ugh.
She closed her window and crawled back into bed, but the damage was done. She was already awake. She thought of turning on the television, but decided against it. With nothing else to do, she stayed in bed and allowed her thoughts to wander over to the neighborhood across the fence.
She’d hoped that laying in bed would help her to get back to sleep, but an hour later she was still awake. She got up.
It was still ridiculously early. She never woke up this early, unless she had somewhere to be. The only place her stepmother would be at this time of day was in the gym, so that was out. Instead, Kara put on a robe and slipped out onto the balcony and into the hot tub. The warm water would definitely have made her sleepy, if not for the cool morning air. She got out of the hot tub, more awake than ever, and leaned on the balcony railing.
The sound of pounding had ceased, and the guy she had seen was gone. She glanced back at her bed, but it didn’t look appealing anymore. Maybe I’ll go for a walk, she thought, looking down at the lush, green plants that grew along the path just below her. Then she spotted movement on the tennis court. But it wasn’t tennis maniacs getting up early for a workout.
She rushed into her room and put on her tennis whites.


Who was she trying to kid? She’d never made the tennis team in college, despite trying out every year. Stacey had, and her urging had been the only reason Kara had tried out. She bounced a ball against the wall, but missed when it came back at her.
This was such a bad idea. She was bad enough at tennis when she wasn’t sleep deprived. She went after the escaping ball anyway and used the opportunity to watch the guy who had woken her up that morning as he pruned a nearby bush. When he turned toward her, she acted like she hadn’t been checking him out and went back to pretending to be good at tennis.
The next time she missed, there was a muffled curse behind her. Her eyes widened and she spun around. There he was, holding his head as her tennis ball bounced innocently away.
“Oh, uh… sorry…” Kara said lamely, jogging toward him. “I… kind of suck at this.”
He put on what was obviously a fake smile. “Allow me,” he said, and chased after the projectile. Kara watched him run after it and waited until he placed it back in her hands. “There you are, Miss.”
When he turned away to get back to work, she couldn’t stop herself from asking, “How come you were making so much noise on that roof this morning? You woke me up.” He had just picked up his pruning shears again, but he froze when she spoke. “That was you, wasn’t it?”
He put down the tool and turned around. “I apologize if I woke you. But you’ll excuse me if I point out that what I do when I’m not on duty here is none of your business.” And then he added in a sarcastic tone, “Miss.”
She drew back. “I… you’re right. I’m sorry. I was just curious.”
He studied her for a moment, then nodded. “If you will excuse me, I need to get back to work.”
“Right.”
There wasn’t any other word for what Kara was feeling but “stupid.” She almost felt like crying, but there was no way she was going to do it in front of him. She gave up the fake tennis playing and went back up to her room to shower. It was stupid to be curious about him! She was on vacation! She was supposed to be enjoying herself with her friends and seeing the sights and buying things she didn’t need!
She fumed all the way up to her room and slammed the door. She sat down on the bed to kick off her shoes, fully intending to head straight to the bathroom afterward, but apparently being angry was very soporific.
She fell asleep.


A hammering sound woke her. Again. She sat up blearily. A light flashed on her phone to let her know she’d missed a few messages, and the clock reported the fact that she was half an hour late for the spa.
There was that hammering sound again. Only… it wasn’t from outside. Not outside her window, anyway. Someone was knocking on the door. She stood and made her way over, pushing herself up on her toes to look through the peephole.
When she saw who it was, she darted over to a mirror to make sure she didn’t have any weird sleep-marks on her face. Then she opened the door the way the daughter of a fortune 500 executive should. “Yes?”
“Excuse me, Miss Wheelock,” said her nemesis, the bellhop/busboy/roofer/gardener, “but your companions sent me to make sure you were all right. They all seem rather anxious to get on with their plans for the day and since they couldn’t reach you on your phone, they thought someone should check on you.”
“I’m fine,” Kara said frostily. “Please tell them I’ll be right down.”
“Of course, Miss,” he replied. Kara turned to shut the door in his face, but he spoke again. “I wonder if you would be so kind…” he began.
Kara couldn’t stop her curiosity from opening the door again, but she did put on a condescending facial expression.
He seemed apprehensive. “I would like to apologize for what I said earlier. I didn’t mean to speak so rudely.”
Despite what she had intended, Kara’s high and mighty manner vanished completely. “Why?” she asked. “I mean, you were right; it wasn’t my business.”
“I…” he seemed surprised, as though he hadn’t expected that reaction. “Regardless, I wanted to make sure you weren’t offended. I don’t want to lose my job.”
“I wouldn’t do something like that!” Kara protested. But as the words left her mouth, she remembered several years before when one of her stepmother’s kitchen staff had been let go after Kara complained about what she saw as disrespectful behavior. As she looked at the man standing nervously in front of her door, she wondered why this situation had been different. Why hadn’t she immediately called the concierge and insisted on his dismissal? It was what she would have done two years ago. It was what she would have done two days ago.
“Thank you,” he said. “And I’m sorry for waking you this morning. I had to be at work early today, and since it’s going to rain later this week, it was the only time I could find to make sure my sister and her children don’t get wet.”
“Oh,” was all Kara could say.
“Is there anything else I can do for you?” he asked, his attitude resuming that of a courteous hotel employee.
“There is,” she said. “What’s your name?”
In reply, he pointed at the name tag that had been in plain sight during their whole conversation, and probably every time she had seen him before.
She smiled and nodded, a blush creeping its way across her face. “Right. Well, it’s nice to meet you, uh,” she squinted at the blocky print. “Joe-a-keem?””
He smiled. “That’s good; most Americans try to pronounce it the Spanish way.”
“I… took French in high school,” Kara admitted. She was sure that her face had ever been so red before. “Um, I’m going to get ready now.”
“I will give the message to your friends.”
“Sure. Okay. Thanks.”
“You’re welcome, Miss Wheelock.”
“Uh, you don’t have to call me that. You can… just call me Kara.”
“All right, Miss Kara.” He smiled, which made him look even more handsome than usual. She smiled back as she shut the door.
Across the room, her phone beeped quietly. She walked over and read the message. “So how did you like your wake up call? ;)
She scowled at the phone, but didn’t reply.
Another text came in as she was setting it down. “We tried to get him to take his shirt off for you but he said it was part of the uniform. Too bad, huh? <3
Kara rolled her eyes and hit the shower. The spa was supposed to be relaxing. There was no time for her to think about anything or anyone that made her nervous.


She was too distracted to really enjoy the spa. She was also still tired; it was a wonder that she didn’t fall asleep on the massage table. It was only when she got to the steam room that it really became a problem, though.
Her friends were there, and they noticed that she wasn’t paying attention.
“Still thinking about your sexy wake up call, Kara?”
“Which one?”
There was a chorus of “Ooh!”s. Kara blinked, and reviewed what had been said. She blushed.
“Oh! No, not like that.”
“There was someone else?”
“No, it was him…”
“What happened, then?”
“...he was fixing his sister’s roof at five in the morning. It woke me up.”
“Oh, is that what that noise was?”
“You sure he didn’t come upstairs and do any other banging after that?”
A chorus of giggles followed this, and an attendant entered to take them all off to their next treatments before she could make the situation clear. Kara found herself getting a facial with Melody’s cousin Alison and another girl that she didn’t know very well; the two of them spent the time questioning her about her “friend.” She didn’t really feel like giving them the whole story, but it was only polite to smile and laugh when necessary. Stacey and Melody, she knew, wouldn’t rest until they’d gotten everything out of her later.
And they did, as they sipped iced lattes and waited for the rest of the girls to finish their manicures.
“So, nothing happened,” Melody clarified.
“Nothing; I didn’t even know his name until you guys sent him up to get me.”
“Doesn’t mean that nothing will happen,” Stacey said, donning a pair of designer sunglasses. “Or that it shouldn’t. There’s nothing wrong with having a little fun on vacation.”
As Melody teased Stacey about her “it’s not cheating if you’re not in the same zip code” policy, Kara shook her head. Sure, Joaquim was gorgeous, but he didn’t seem like the kind of guy who would jump into bed with any hot sorority girl who beckoned. Honestly, the hotel probably wouldn’t hire someone like that. Besides, she didn’t think that a guy who worked so hard that he had to get up before five in the morning to fix his sister’s roof would be up for a fling.
And neither was she.


Three days later, Kara was sitting under an umbrella by the pool. Some of her friends had gone out shopping, and a few were floating in the water below her. She was on the lookout for Joaquim. She’d seen him several times in the past few days, but he hadn’t had time to speak to her since the day he came to wake her up. She was just remembering that most of his afternoon duties took place indoors when there was a sound to her right.
It was the sound of someone clearing their throat.
“Excuse me, Miss Wheelock?”
She turned to see a severe-looking woman in a hotel uniform whose name tag betrayed her as the head of housekeeping.
“Yes? Is there something you want?”
“I don’t mean to bother you, but I have been hearing some things that concern me. I wanted to make sure you knew that we do not allow any member of our staff to fraternize with guests; if you have had to deal with any unwanted advances, be assured that I will put a stop to them and ensure that the staff member in question is dismissed.”
“What?”
“If any member of our staff has said or done anything inappropriate to you, I would like to make sure the matter is dealt with as soon as possible. This is not the sort of hotel that allows that kind of thing, Miss Wheelock.”
Kara blinked. “Are you asking me what I think you’re asking me?”
“I merely want to make sure that your stay here is as comfortable as possible, Miss,” the housekeeping manager clarified.
“You can start by not having this conversation with me ever again!” Kara replied angrily. “You can rest assured that no member of your staff has said or done anything inappropriate. I don’t know what kind of rumors you may have heard, and I don’t care. If I had a problem, you’d better believe that I would have said something!”
The housekeeping manager stepped back. “I apologize for any inconvenience. Please know that if there is anything I or any of my staff can do for you, it will be attended to immediately.”
Kara’s mouth hung open as she watched the woman walk away. “What was that about?” she scoffed aloud.
“Maybe your cabana boy-toy?” offered Alison, strolling up as she toweled off her hair.
“My what?”
“That wake-up call guy.”
“Why would anyone think he had done anything inappropriate? You guys were the ones who sent him up!”
“Yeah, but hadn’t he, y’know, already woken you up that day?” she asked with a grin. Kara glared daggers at Melody’s cousin and the girl took a step back. “What? You were the one who said it.”
“I didn’t mean it like that!” Kara insisted, and spilled her drink as she stormed back inside the hotel. She had to find Joaquim and apologize for maybe almost getting him fired without even meaning to. Unless he’d already been fired! Kara tore around the lobby, ducking her head into the exercise room and the indoor pool, hoping to catch a glimpse of him.
Unfortunately, she didn’t. Where could he be? Well… maybe it was his day off? Did he even have a day off? Maybe she could ask someone who worked at the hotel.
On second thought, that’s probably a bad idea.
Maybe… she could just go to his house, and ask there. But she didn’t know how to get around the fence at the back of the hotel, much less over the barbed wire that ran along the top of it. Although even if she could get there, would she know which house was his? If she stopped to ask for directions, would the person she asked know who he was? Or would they even speak English?
Kara was distressed. And there was really only one thing that calmed her down when she got like this.
She walked out the front door of the hotel and had a doorman hail a cab to take her to the shopping district.


Having been encouraged by Stacey and Melody and a brand new pair of shoes, Kara stepped into the dining room that evening determined to see Joaquim or, at the very least, to ask about him. Thankfully, he was there, bussing tables, and when he walked past theirs, she stopped him to ask if he could bring them some water refills.
When he did, she tried to pour out a rushed apology, but he shook his head and said, “Later. Is there anything else I can get for you ladies?”
Kara loitered outside the dining room after everyone had gone off to get ready to go dancing, then stayed at the hotel when they left, choosing to loiter on the terrace instead. She knew what “later” meant, but not when it would finally come. She wished Joaquim had been more specific. She watched the sun set over his neighborhood, and stood up to go back to her room; her new shoes were killing her feet.
“Can I get you anything else, Miss? Another drink?”
She turned and found him standing in the doorway.
“I’m so sorry,” she breathed, “did you get in trouble with the manager? Some of the other girls started a rumor about us when they didn’t have all the facts. It’s sort of a hobby for sorority girls.”
He smiled. “I did get called into her office, but I told her that I hadn’t done anything that wasn’t in my job description. She believed me.”
“Good,” Kara said, breathing a sigh of relief.
“I thought so too,” he replied. “I would not like to lose this job; it’s kind of important to continue feeding my family.”
“Your family? Are you… are you married, then?”
Joaquim held up his left hand, which was unadorned with any jewelry, wedding band or otherwise.
“Right. You may have noticed that I’m blind to things that are in plain sight.”
He smiled. “I was engaged once,” he said, moving forward to clear her empty glass and cocktail napkins off the table. “But she ran away with someone else. A guest who was staying at this hotel, actually.”
“Wow, that… sucks…” Kara mumbled, not knowing what else to say.
He assented with a nod.
“I guess it also kind of explains the no-fraternizing policy around here, too, huh?” After a moment of what Kara felt was extremely uncomfortable silence, she tried again. “But I’m glad you didn’t get in trouble. I was afraid you had, since I didn’t I see you around this afternoon.”
“I was doing some extra work for the janitorial staff,” Joaquim said. “Replacing light bulbs, that kind of thing. My sister has an interview here soon and I wanted to earn a little extra to buy her something new to wear so that she will make a good impression.”
“Oh, that’s good.” Silence threatened to stretch between them once more, but Kara was determined to hold it back. “Is there anything I can do?” she asked. “You know, to, uh, make up for the whole rumor-that-almost-got-you-fired thing?”
Joaquim smiled. “Thank you, but I don’t think so. Unless you can guarantee that my sister gets the job.” He looked down at his hands. “I should get this back to the bar. Thank you for what you’ve done for me so far, Miss Kara.”
“You don’t have to call me ‘Miss!’” she called after him.
He stopped to smile back at her. “I think that might be what the housekeeping manager would call ‘inappropriate behavior,’ don’t you?”
She wrinkled her nose. “You might have a point there. Well, do you want me to yell at you for bringing me the wrong drink or something? That’s not fraternize-y.”
“Maybe later,” he called back, flashing her a grin.
At that, Kara’s heart went thump. She was starting to think that if it weren’t for the risk to his job, she wouldn’t mind knowing him a little better.